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Post by benedictjjones on Jul 8, 2009 13:40:35 GMT
pulled down because I think I might have finally placed it - more info as I get it.
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Post by franklinmarsh on Jul 8, 2009 15:40:36 GMT
That's utterly bizarre, Ben. The food motif is really disconcerting. Although you kind of know what will happen, it's still horrible. Good job, Sir!
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Post by benedictjjones on Jul 8, 2009 15:42:24 GMT
ta! yes the food theme running through is meant to show you what is on the way! =O)
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Post by judkinsmajor on Nov 6, 2009 16:59:57 GMT
Excellent job, Benedict. The fall of Berlin is a fantastic setting for a horror story and I wonder if anyone's actually done it before. What struck me, apart from the food motif, was how time seemed to speed up towards the end, starting out slow and descriptive but almost turning into a diabolical newsreel by the end. The effect worked very well for the story.
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Post by benedictjjones on Nov 10, 2009 9:38:52 GMT
cheers! as a setting i love the fall of berlin and the period just before and after. anthony beevors 'berlin' is a great source of info for this period.
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